Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Last Writ Post.


This isn’t me sucking up. This isn’t me lying to get a good grade. I LOVED this course. Honestly, I looked forward to coming to this writing class, and I know many of my peers felt the same way. A lot has to do with the professor; we got really frickin’ lucky. I don’t know that many kids who thought their professor was as awesome as mine and my fellow writ peers.
            I’ve always been fascinated by contemporary news and how news travels and changes over time. I think we had awesome discussions about contemporary events and did a good job linking those discussions and events to our writing prompts. It’s fun to write about things that interest you and happen in the world around you, instead of writing about boring, monotone prompts. In-class discussions were always interesting, not to mention entertaining…I’d always get a good laugh out of something. Getting to choose the blog we followed and having the opportunity to write a lot of blogs/an essay about that made the class very entertaining. I actually got really into it. Reading the New York Times has been extremely useful because I’ve developed a habit of reading the news, and this was something I always wanted to get in to! I definitely think that following blogs, reading the newspaper, and even writing blogs are habits that I will continue beyond this course.

Thanks Professor LeakeJ



Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Revise, revise, revise.



I chose to edit this post because it is one of the posts I wrote quickest, without reading through. I realized I had lots of incorrect word choice, sentence structure, and positioning.

ORIGINAL:

The two blogs that I am following are “Borderland Beat”, which gives the American perspective on narcotic drug trafficking in Mexico and “El Blog del Narco”, which gives the Mexican perspective on the events of narcotic drug trafficking in Mexico. Both blogs have multiple authors, who are reporters who write stories on the horrific happenings due to violence and narcotic drug trafficking in Mexico. The “Borderland Beat” blog intends to inform the world of the terrible events occurring in Mexico in an unbiased manner, intending to show no involvement from the U.S. They intend to only state facts. In this blog, the pictures are much more gruesome and graphic than they are in the Mexican blog, “El blog del Narco”. They also include videos from Mexican news broadcasts. The “Borderland Beat” has sort of a C.S.I, cop-feel to it. “El blog del Narco” on the other hand, has a more concerning vibe to it. Obviously, since it is from the Mexican perspective, it shows its concern for its people and it’s citizens. Indeed, it addresses all of the horrible occurrences due to narcotic drug trafficking, but it also addresses the affects that these tragedies have had on the people of Mexico, such as children, the indigenous population, etc. Its purpose is to create a conscience and a sense of concern within the Mexican people, hoping to spark a turn for change. “El Blog del Narco,” is quicker to admit U.S involvement in narcotic drug trafficking, than “Borderland Beat”.

REVISED

I am following two blogs; one is named “Borderland Beat” and the other “El Blog del Narco”. Borderland Beat gives the American perspective on narcotic drug trafficking in Mexico. El Blog del Narco gives the Mexican perspective on the drug trafficking events.

Both blogs have multiple authors, who are reporters writing about the horrific happenings in Mexico due to violence, corruption, and narcotic drug trafficking.

The Borderland Beat blog intends to inform its audience on the terrible events that occur in Mexico in an unbiased manner, concealing U.S involvement. It tries to give facts, not opinion. In this blog, images are much more gruesome and graphic than they are in the Mexican blog. Also, they include videos from Mexican news broadcasts, American news broadcasts, and YouTube. Borderland Beat has a C.S.I/crime scene feel.

On the other hand, El Blog del Narco has a more concerned approach. Obviously, since it comes from a Mexican perspective, it demonstrates a concern for its country’s people.  Indeed, it addresses the horrific occurrences due to narcotic drug trafficking; also it includes how these occurrences affect the people of Mexico, like children, the indigenous population, etc. Its purpose is to create conscience and a sence of concern within the Mexican people. This blog hopes to spark change. Lastly, El Blog del Narco is quicker to admit U.S involvement in the drug trade than Borderland Beat is. 

Harris: Countering



Harris’ idea of countering is defined as “rewriting as a way of countering and phrasings that strike you as mistaken, troubling or incomplete. In the blog world, this is EXTREMELY prominent. For example, blogs can use countering by disagreeing with a politician, voicing their opinion on a controversial topic, like a Catholic speaking against abortion to a liberal audience. My blogs are pretty unbiased, even though they may show a very subliminal tendency towards a certain side/opinion, they don’t write directly against or for it. It is the blog commenters who provide excellent examples of countering. Blog commenters everywhere LOVE to speak their minds, and let’s just say…there’s no filter.

            The assortment of blog commenters in the two blogs that I’ve been following, provide great examples of countering. In one of Borderland Beat’s articles, “Mexican Governor accused over cash-filled suitcase”, blog commenters provide interesting opinions on the matter:

                        “Cut their heads of for protecting the Zetas”-says Anonymous

“its no different then the US officials being paid by big corporations its all greed we will all have are moment of truth tho” –Anonymous 2
……(HAHA, learn to spell first buddy)

“ . . . I still hope like HELL the PAN is able to stay in power”-Anonymous 3

El Blog del Narco, also has many opinionated followers, in the video clip/article about “Ixtapaluca, el municipio mas corrupto del area conurbada del D.F” (Ixtapaluca, the most corrupt town council in a metropolitan area of Mexico City). For the sake of understanding by my English speakers, here are some translated comments:

“MEXICO CITY NATIVES, UGLY, OBESE, MIDGETS, BIG-STOMACHED, FACE OF A CORRUPT MEXICO CITYAN  HAHAHAHA!!!” –El Chicles (The Gums)….Calm down there, buddy.

“and, WHO LEFT BEHIND THIS SHIT?? Well, Enrique Pena Poop….let’s throw lot’s of dirt on him for the votings of the great one my fellow patriots!...people are stupid and they let themselves be influenced by his little puppy face and because he is married to Guilota (famous soap opera start) but remember, HE DIDN’T KNOW THE NAME OF THREE BOOKS, HE DIDN’T KNOW WHAT THE MINIMUM WAGE IS, AND HE DIDN’T KNOW HOW TO GIVE A SPEECH IN ENGLISH”- lizzetteramsey4

Although these examples of countering are a quite “out there” and a bit offensive, they provide examples of how people use countering when responding to an article/other people’s work.

Harris: Fowarding


                  Harris’ idea of forwarding applies to many of the blog posts that I have been following during this class. Both Borderland Beat and El Blog del Narco use the concept of forwarding within their reports when describing the accounts of narcotic drug trafficking and violence in Mexico. Forwarding is described by Harris as  “forwarding” an email: forwarding the thoughts of another source/author into your own work. 

                  The blogs that I have been reading contain many different examples of forwarding within them. For me, this increases the feeling of credibility from these blog sources; I feel like I’m getting a broader perspective instead of a single-lensed perspective. 

                   In the blog, Borderland Beat, they provide more in depth articles about a subject at the end of some reports. For example, if they mention a certain drug lord, they might provide a link to a more detailed article about that drug lord from a different site. Additionally, they provide news clips from different news sources, both from a Mexican and American perspective. Not only do they provide news clips from different news channels, they have YouTube videos, from actual events, which provide a first-hand account of what occurred during that event. These videos are extremely difficult to watch (personally I haven’t even been able to click on them just by the titles), but they are about as accurate as one can get. 

                  Moreover, El Blog del Narco sites other credible news sources, sometimes even word for word. For example, they tend to frequently use reports from the Washington Post. These articles are translated and sometimes the only difference is the introductory paragraph or a snippet about the article in italics, the conclusion, and the title. It’s actually really interesting to see how the article from the Washington Post may be the same content and report as the one in El Blog del Narco, but just reading the title completely throws you off. Sometimes, it takes me a while to realize that the articles are about the same thing, because the title were so different I start reading it with the preconception that the articles are about different topics. 

                   Forwarding sources and reports definitely gives these blogs a sense of reliability. I feel this way when it comes to writing articles about actual events.

Monday, March 5, 2012

Extended Essay: WITH SOURCES


Nicole Eldridge
Extended Essay #2
Writ 1122

News Metamorphosis

            News: it is kind of like gossip, simple as that. Every news source, every reporter, every commentator takes whatever pieces of a news story they want, emphasizes certain elements, and sometimes either consciously or unconsciously add their own bias. My point is this: a news story can be anything one wants it to be, it can be the truth, it can be an exaggerated version of the truth, it can an opinion on a topic, it can be persuasive, it can be factual, it can be incorrect. A news story has many lives and many versions, for as the story travels, the version of the story varies.
            Take the 2012 Mexican presidential elections, for example. Every news source, interested in the topic, has something to say. But everybody says it differently; depending on what content one wants their audience to receive and how they want them to interpret it. While researching the elections, I realized how different sources had different opinions and focuses. They portrayed political parties and candidates in whatever light they pleased. As I researched the elections, I was following two blogs: “Borderland Beat” and “El Blog del Narco”. Both give a perspective to the narcotic drug trafficking issues in Mexico. “Borderland Beat” provides American insight, in a “crime scene” manner. On the other hand “El Blog del Narco” provides a Mexican opinion with concern for its people. In addition to these sites, I read articles from the Washington Post and The New York Times.  I came to the realization that presidential elections are a prime example of how new stories have different lives and facets. Each news source provides similar information on certain topics, yet completely opposite opinions on others. Because of the fact that Mexico is undergoing a time of extreme violence, bloody horrors, and constant fear due to the narcotic drug trafficking and other illegal activities (such as female trafficking), the Mexican people are looking for a candidate to help bring an end to this horrific era. Either way, news reporters are able to find dirt about any candidate, which makes people’s opinions either be firmly for or against a candidate, or sway from side to side. Borderland Beat, El Blog del Narco, The Washington Post, and The New York Times each had a unique opinion on the topic.
            Before I begin to explain how these elections have been portrayed by various sources, I would like to give a bit of background information on the two parties who are battling for the presidency: the PAN party and the PRI party. The PAN party is currently in office, the country’s leader is Felipe Calderon. Ever since Calderon entered office, violence has incremented immensely. Frankly, this is due to his philosophy that one must not cooperate or make deals with the leaders of this drug war in order to end it. Josefina Vazquez Mota, the first woman presidential candidate, is the PAN party’s leading candidate who seems to have a shot at the presidency. She is seen by many as “just what Mexico needs”. Moreover, the opposing party, the PRI party, was in power for a long time before the PAN party entered office. During the PRI party’s control, not only was there less violence, but it was much more subtle. Due to the fact that the PRI party made many deals and compensations with the narcotic drug traffickers, violence could be kept on a leash…to a certain extent. Yet, many thought making a pact with the criminals did not solve the actual problem: death, drug trafficking, violence, etc. Additionally, for many years, the PRI’s presidential candidate, Enrique Pena Nieto, has been Mexico’s political heartthrob. Everyone always believed he was the solution to the country’s problems and was going to be the future president of Mexico…until Vazquez Mota came along. Also, after many recent scandals and demonstrations of his ignorance, many have questioned if Pena Nieto is actually as great as he seemed. Is he going to continue the footsteps of his predecessors? Will he continue to make pacts with the narcotic drug lords? News sources can have either wonderful and/or awful opinions about the parties and candidates.
            What did the four sources that I researched from have to say about each party? Borderland Beat’s title says it all: “If PRI regains control: Withdrawal military and return to a pact with the devil?” Obviously, this blog does not think that PRI party is suited for the presidency. In part of the article they state, “they made pacts with criminals and now Pena Nieto, when the time comes is going to say ‘I don’t know anything…” This demonstrates that Borderland Beat believes that the PRI party hides their involvement in deals with drug traffickers. Vazquez Mota’s rising popularity is only briefly mentioned, which demonstrates that Borderland Beat had a larger concern with the PRI party being elected. El Blog de Narco focused on different topics and took a different approach to the elections, for their article “Violencia costaria la presidencia al PAN” expresses how the tremendous increase in violence during Calderon’s presidency might cause the loss of control by this party. Here, Vazquez Mota is never mentioned. Additionally, El Blog del Narco’s article, “Pena Nieto pide proteger comicos del narcotifico”, talks about how Pena Nieto says that he will not be involved in Mexico’s dirty war and making pacts with the drug lords. Even though this may be untrue, Mexico wants to believe it; Mexico wants to believe this primarily because they want to believe that corruption within the government is not as bad as it is said to be and that Nieto has the will defy his political party’s old ways. I found it quite interesting that the The Washington Post had extremely similar articles to El Blog del Narco. But the titles were so different that I could not tell that they would be about the same topics and share the same opinion. Later, I realized El Blog del Narco implemented a lot of Harris’ idea of “forwarding”, and quoted many of its articles from the Washington Post. The Washington Post’s article, “Mexicans want security, but candidates vague on drug war policy”, supported Pena by saying “he will probably enhance Mexico’s cooperation with the United States”. Although The Washington Post and El Blog del Narco both have similar ideas and opinions, they provide different reasons to explain why Pena Nieto is a strong candidate. Both sources know who their audience is and what culture they belong to. Indeed, news sources know what aspects of a story will make their certain audience be convinced by their argument. Finally, the liberal New York Times explicitly expressed their views on the presidential election in the article, “Vazquez Mota Paves New Path in Mexico”. Essentially, the Times showed their support for the female candidate, Vazquez Mota, by stating she could be “offering a fresh approach for a party that has been mired in a bloody drug war” and that “she’s being put forward as the nurturing, soothing, national caretaker who will put the house back in order”. Admiration was far from the adjective that the Times used to describe Vazquez Mota’s opponent, Pena Nieto. He is portrayed as a “telegenic former governor of Mexico State . . . married to one of the country’s biggest soap opera stars . . .. Despite some gaffes, and the recent acknowledgement of two out-of –wedlock children, he still leads . . . in opinion polls.” Making him sound more like a scandalous pop star than a presidential candidate, the Times leaves it clear that they support the Josefina and the PAN party. As previously read, political campaigns, especially presidential elections, are the perfect way to exemplify the multiple lives of a news story. Each source wrote about the topics that were convenient for them and pertinent to their desired audience. Not only did it focus on certain topics or parties more than others, but it showed a bias towards one side or the other. Drug trafficking and violence is a main concern during these elections, so choosing the candidate who will help Mexico in changing for the better is a main priority.
During February of this year, current Mexican president, Felipe Calderon, pulled a scandalous stunt. Brady Campaign explains Calderon “unveiled a giant billboard, made with three tons of crushed firearm used in drug violence and visible from the American side (El Paso, TX) of the border, exclaiming, “No More Weapons!” This controversial sign has caused many people to report the story, each in their own way. Some people praise Calderon for his bravery, whereas others are furious that he would ever dare. This essay will talk about four different sources, Brady Campaign’s opinion article, El Mundo Narco (a Mexican blog), CNN, and a local, Mexican newspaper from the city that the sign was put in, El Diario from Juarez.
One of the most controversial articles posted on the subject, was surprisingly posted by an American, Brady Campaign. His opinion piece, “Brady Campaign on Felipe Calderon’s ‘No More Weapons!’ Sign”, has created an outrageous, angry audience. After explaining what happened, he went on to agree with the Mexican president’s controversial move. He said it was the United State’s fault for not having strong enough federal gun laws. Criticizing the gun laws, he began giving more details about how these gun laws should be changed. His most impactful sentence was: “Trafficking of assault weapons and handguns out of American gun shops is not just a Mexican tragedy. It is an American tragedy as well”. You can only imagine how furious Brady’s fellow Americans were about the fact that he would agree with Calderon’s astounding sign.  Harris’ idea of “countering” was perfectly exemplified by all of the raging commenters. An example of this was a comment “We should put up a sign that says No More Mojados! and face it towards the Mexican border”. Most people agreed with this comment, stating that Americans should make a sign that was pleading illegal immigrants to stop coming in.
Mundo Narco, a Mexican blog, had an article “Pediran retiro el letrero vs. armas” took a completely different turn on the issue. Surprisingly enough, many Juarez locals were quite upset that the sign was put up, but they were mainly upset because it was put up in Juarez. Actually, petitioned for the sign to be erected. They said that creating that sign and placing it in Juarez instead of any other border town epitomized the fact that Juarez is filled with danger. Juarez locals do not want to be known as a city of blood, terror, and despair. Instead they would like to be known as a city with hope and other positive factors, for they feel that this can help the city move forward. In the end, they did not disagree with the fact that the sign was put up, but the fact that the sign was put up in their city.
In terms of a more formal news source, CNN, gave a much more factual account about the story. It did not present a bias; it just gave facts. The article, ‘Mexican President to US: No More Weapons’, Calderon gave a speech in which he explained how violence in Mexico has skyrocketed and the easy access to high powered weapons in the U.S has made it easier for drug traffickers to provide weapons to carry out their violent actions. Calderon acknowledged and thanked President Obama, for his efforts to deal with the issue, but believed it was not enough. “More than 47,000 people have been killed in Mexico due to drug related violence since December 2006” states the article.  Calderon is quoted in the article: “We need your help to stop violence, We need you to reduce your consumption of drugs and to dramatically reduce the flow of money to criminal organizations of Mexico . . . but beyond the topic of drugs, the best way that you, the American people, can help reduce the violence in Mexico is through legislation that has already been in force in the United States, blocking the inhumane weapons trafficking into our country”. To be honest, this statement made people furious. Countering was once again demonstrated; furious article commentators once again went wild about the issue of illegal immigration and how Americans should start telling Mexico: Stop Illegal Immigration! Although the article was meant to be unbiased, it caused lots of commentators to go furious and form strong opinions.
Contrary to the formal, American newspaper, the formal, Mexican newspaper was filled with bias and opinions. Juarez’s local newspaper, El Diario, did not restrain themselves on their opinion. The reporter even said, the U.S should make signs facing the Mexican border that make the Mexicans reflect about the violence in their country, and how their problems were not just the United State’s fault, they were mainly Mexico’s. El Diario said the Mexico’s violence issue was not necessarily going to be fixed with more armed police, but by giving the citizens opportunities to be exposed to art, sports, culture, education, etc. Less violence and weapons was they key. The newspaper said that although the president’s sign did not have a bad intention, signs should also be created to face Mexico and remind the Mexicans of their issues. Truly, it is interesting to see how an American newspaper tries to stay unbiased, whereas as the Mexican newspaper openly scolded its own people.
After researching this story, it was plain and simple. Events only consist of one, true story, but many versions. Blogs and opinion pieces tend to have more extreme, explicit views on topics. But even newspapers feel free to speak their minds. News sources do what they want. Some will state strictly facts. Some will agree and try to make others agree with them. Some will disagree and try to make others realize why they disagree. It all depends on who the audience is and what purpose the article serves. The way a news story is portrayed tends to have a drastic effect on how people interpret, or receive their story. Imagine the difference of opinion and perspective that the person who only read Brady Campaign’s article has versus the person who only read El Diario’s article. Yes, it was the same story, but presented in completely different angles. Indeed, news stories have many lives, many versions, and this all affects the audience’s way of receiving the story.
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